Sunday 22 March 2020

Chapter One....

07.16hrs.

Iris Green peers through the white net curtains, through a carefully cut hole, about one centimetre square, and spies Douglas heading out for work. A soft brown leather satchel containing his laptop, lunch, and paperwork, is slung over his shoulder. She watches him as he carelessly throws the satchel onto the back seat of his Range Rover. She blinks as the sunlight reflects from his wing mirror and glances her eye. Iris looks at her watch, thumbs open a school exercise book and jots down the following:- ‘07.16hrs, Douglas Manning leaves for work,’ beneath an entry that reads ‘20.16hrs, Douglas Manning returns from work.’ She takes a photograph with her camera as Douglas drives off up the road and out of focus. She will print it off later. She will then stick it, with Pritt Stick, into a scrapbook filled with similar images, and items of sentiment. Iris looks back at the red panelled front door where moments earlier Douglas had stood. Even though he isn’t there she takes another photograph anyway. The red panelled front door opens, and Annie Manning, in a pink dressing robe and bare feet, slaps flat footed up the tiled path and stuffs a black sack of rubbish into a wheelie bin. The sack is torn and a chocolate wrapper drops onto the path.

7 comments:

  1. It has begun!

    Who is Iris Green? Why does Douglas Manning work such long hours? Where did Annie Manning get that pink dressing robe from? And what sort of chocolate wrapper???

    Bravo, Ms Scarlet! You have given us much to deliberate on and plenty of jumping off (on?) points.

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  2. I hope so!
    You can always do a Meanwhile, in a galaxy far, far, far away...
    It's really hard to start one of these things!
    Sx

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  3. *anxiously waiting for the next installment* xoxox

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  4. I just looked up Pritt Stick. At first I thought it was an odd named character. Glue stick, yeah the kids used those for school projects.

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  5. hmmm....is Iris carrying a torch for her nreighbour? Or a torch...for her neighbour's wife? Wait a minute...maybe the pink-robed woman is his mother?

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  6. Brilliant! We've got our work cut out for us, mates.

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